半截蜡烛

乌托邦

半截蜡烛
            ————送给我远方的好朋友                     
            
      某日，小区停电了，
        我打开抽屉，
        取出上次剩下的半截蜡烛，  
     一点烛光，
       房间顿时明亮了，
       我坐在书桌前，
       整理着过去的书信
       。。。。。。
       烛光一闪一闪，
       溶化了的蜡烛，
       象眼泪，
       一行一行往下掉，
      半截蜡烛，
      很快会燃尽，
      。。。。。。
       我的心沉沉的，
       她使我想起了，
       我的好朋友，
       一位曾在山区任教的老师。
       十年前，
       你象春蚕般吐着丝，
       像老黄牛，
       默默地耕耘着，
       培养着一批又一批学生，
       走出山区，
       走出贫困，
       但远大的理想，
       使你不甘寂寞。
       “不能让家乡永远贫困”
       以我的能力，
       为山区创造财富，
       为孩子创造更好的学习环境“
你说服亲人，
告别孩子，
“明天我会回来，
建座希望学校
你以山里人
坚韧不拔的性格
在广州站稳了脚
掘得了第一桶金
你哭、你笑，
崭新的人民币，
瞬间变成了一座希望学校，
从此，山里走出更多的大学生，
你自豪、你骄傲。
你很富有，
但你并不享受
       外出吃剩的饭菜
       你要打包，
       账单递过来，
       你要对帐，
       毫不含糊，
       皮包的拉链坏了，
       修一下继续使用
       家里简单的摆设，
       一点也不豪华，
       手机的边角，
       已经磨损得发亮，
       这就是人们不可理喻的老板。
       贫困、独居的长者，
       你一户一户地去探访，
       看到街上有流浪汉，
       你会停下脚步，
       细究原由，
       “为何有家归不了”？
        为生活困难 的长者
         你慷慨解囊，
         被亲人遗弃的长者，
         你把他们接回家，
        管吃管住，，
        真情感动了遗弃者，
        带着满怀的歉意，
        将亲人带回家
        慈悲为怀，
        阿弥陀佛。
      
        可是上天不公，
        竟让你染病，
        但你并没有被病魔吓倒，
        也没有消沉，
        积极治疗，
        躺在病床上，生意做成一单又一单，
        拨出的电话，总是报喜不报忧，
        心里总还惦记着
        自己的服务对象。
   
        看着即将熄灭的蜡烛，
        我哭着把它吹灭掉，
        我宁肯呆在黑暗，
        想着您过去的好，
        我不忍蜡烛燃尽，
        我小心翼翼，
        将它收藏好，
        我远方的朋友，
        你现在可好？

                       2005年12月5日
                          纪念国际志愿者日为我的好朋友作

Berber

我译这篇吧

Berber

Half of the candle
---------to my friends from afar
Oneday,the district blackouts,
I opened the drawer,
Removed the last remaining half of the candle.
a little candle light,
bright rooms of a sudden,
I sat before the desk,
Finishing with the last correspondence.
Candle light keep flashing,
The melted candles,
As tears,
Flow lines down.
Half of candles,
Will burn quikly.
My heart is heavy,
She reminds me,
My good friend,
Who has been in the mountains to teach as a teacher.
Ten years ago,
As you do emitting silkworm silk,
Like ox,
In obscurity.
To foster a large number of students.
Out of the mountain,
Out of poverty,
A lofty ideal,
Make you limelight.
“Poverty will not let home forever”
To my ability,
To create wealth for the mountains,
To ereate a better learning environment.
You convice relatives,
Say goodbye to your children.
“I will be back tomorrow,
To build a school full of hope here.”
With the strong personality of the mountain people
You gaining a solid footing in guangzhou,
Scored first pot of gole digging.
You cry ,you smile.
The new renminbi,
Was turned into a hope school.
Since then,more mountains out of college,
You proud ,you proud!
You are rich,
But you do not overspending.
The leftover food in dinner,
You must be packing.
Invoice crosses,
You must be reconciliations.
Unequivocally.
Bag zipper bad,
Continue to be revised to use.
Simple home furnishings,
Never luxurious,
Cell phone corner,
Have already wear shiny.
That was ridiculous boss.
The poor ,the elderly living alone,
You have to visit one at a time to see.
If there are homeless,
You have to stop,
A close study of why,
“why not go home if?”
Your denerosity life difficult for the elderly,
The elderly were abandoned by their families,
You take them home,
provide them food and accommodation.
Sincerely touched the deserted,
With a full apology to take their relvtive home.
Benevolence,
Onitofo.
But god is unfair,
Even let you sick,
But you are not intimidated by the disease,
Has not become depressed,
Aggressive treatment,lying in bed,
Another cause is a single business alone,
The telephone,
Always report good news,
You also still worrying about their overall service.
Watching soon extinguished candles,
I was crying to blowing it stubbed out.
I would rather stay in the dark,
Thinking about your last things.
I could not burn out the candles,
I cautiously,
Take it a good collection,
My distant friends,
How things going now?
December 5th,2005
To mark the international volunteer day for my friends

Berber

“慈悲为怀，阿弥陀佛。”不会译，高手看一看怎么译吧

FENYUN1981

The mercy is the bosom, Amida Buddha

剑走偏锋

高吖！！

锦带玉麒麟

甘鬼劲噶！

桐桐

好棒哦！

锦带玉麒麟

我想问berber既英语水平几级 啊？

乐痞子

可能我翻译的不是一首诗，更像一篇散文。。译得不好的地方，请指教！！也希望日后能够一起研究研究一下.....................
A  handicapped candle
                                       --------to a friend afar
                        One day, lights turned off in my building yard,
                         So, I turned out the drawer,
                 And took out a handicapped candle left before,
         Satting at my desk, I ignited it, which lighted the whole room in a second, filing the letters………
                        Shinning, the candle, dissolved little by little,
it seems like tears rolled down cheeks drop by drop.
However, It would burn away to nothing in a few minutes.
                         I turned into blue color,
because it reminded me of my good friend,
the one who worked as a teacher in a countytown.
        One decade had gone, you have worked heart and soul,
cultivating one and one sesson students.
Just like the silkworm producing a cocoon of silk till the end,
like the old cattle faming for the people without any complaints.  
Although you left the countytown, a poor town,
you felt longly because of the unacheived great dream.
      “ I can’t let my hometown adside and poor forever.” You said.
I have to do something to change that embrassing situation, I need
working harder and harder to make money and let our next generation
access to a good study environment.
   Finally,you convinced your parents and children,  
and waved goodby to them,
saying you would come back one day and build a hope school.   
Fortunately, with the farmer’s fortitude,
you find your place and earn a living in guangzhou.
You got enough money to build that hope school,
you simled in tears.And you made it.
From then on, there are lots of students can go to school
and get a chance to universities.
You are on top of the world and feel pround of that all.
You are rich, but you live simple. Such as,
You would take the left dishes home, if you out to dinner.
You would check the bill carefully and make sure all things right.
You would repair the handbag zipper and use it in stead of buying another one.  
Your home setting is simple and tidy, nothing luxury.
Even your cell phone, there is a conner grind badly, you don't think about chane a stylish one.
Such an incredible boss like you.
However, you are so kind that visit the poor and the lonely aged people. What's more, you would stop to ask the trampers wondering streets:
why you leave you home? Why you can’t back home?”
You help the old in trubles and support their lives.
You take the abandoned elder home, give them house and food.
That kindily behavior really moved the abandoner, so they take their relatives home again and look good after them.
Always be kindhearty and ready to help others, sakyamuni.
Life is not always so kind and sometimes seems to be unfair.
You got a serious disease, but you were not scarded.
In stead of feeling down and hopeless, you believed you will be fine some day and followed doctor’s advices.
Although you sicked in bed, you still ran your business well.
Always be told good news in business.
Kindily enough, you still concerned the poor and the old and the homeless.
You just as the candle that lighting for others, always.
Seeing the candle extinguished soon, I put it out in tears.
I‘d rather stayed in dark than seeing the candle gone , because of recalling your good. I colleted it patiently and carefully.
My friend, how things going on with you?

                         Deceber 5th 2005
               
To mark the international volunteer’s day for my friends

乐痞子

请大家多给给意见！！！在下在此谢谢各位啦！

fengls89

写的.译的,都好好哦~